6-May-2010

Today was our final day for this week, the next week we will not have any lessons and this is the last blog day. So today I finished up my conclusion and then started reading it in my head to proof read it. I read it once more and I found some mistakes which I changed. But the final piece still is not ready.

4-May-2010

Today was a Tuesday, I worked on my first characteristic which was education of Ancient China. I was still working on it because this was my longest paragraphs, but I finished it and started to work on the jobs characteristic but it was hard because I didn't know how to start my paragraphs.

28-April-2010:

Today we had a double lesson, in the first lesson I started writing my paragraph/s for Education of the Ancient Chinese Civilization. I was about to finish writing paragraphs for education but the it was time to take a little break and then when we came back and our teacher showed us a site called wordle.net and you can just copy and paste your text on the text box given and they would put it in a stylish design. But we didn't really need that for our essay so I went back to writing my paragraphs. So today I ,made a couple of achievements, though I really need some time at home to work on the essay if we were allowed to take our information notes.

27-April-2010:

Today I opened my word document for education and took out all my notes for Ancient Chinese from my folder and started to write paragraphs about education for my essay. The teacher told us to try and finish it today just as a draft. So I wrote two long paragraphs but I tried to follow the good paragraph example and be aware not to make the same mistakes in the bad paragraph example.

26-April-2010

Today I had looked at the two examples of a good and bad paragraph so that I could start writing my essay.Then I started planning my essay so I opened five pages one for my Introduction, for education, Jobs, Arts and architecture and one for my conclusion. I first started with my first characteristic which was education the next lesson hopefully I will finish my paragraphs for education.

22-April-2010:

This day I just came from my first P.E swimming lesson this year and I had fun, so when I came to humanities I was in a good mood and worked good though our report cards were next so I was also frustrated. Today was also the last day searching and I chose to finalize my search with some more information for the introduction and the Ancient Chinese "jobs". In google I searched Ancient Chinese jobs and I found a really nice website that also gave me ideas for the introduction.

21-April-2010:

Today we had a double lesson and for the first lesson I used easybib.com again to finish of the rest of the bibliography. First I put the 4 books and the information and then I started putting the website I used to search about Jobs. Then I started searching again and I found a good website that talks about the Ancient Chinese dynasties which I wrote about on my cards.